Dear Sir,
I am Abed Joy from 31 North Circular Road, Dhanmondi, Dhaka. I would like to draw your kind attention to the problem with garbage pickup in our neighborhood.
I regret to inform you that, in the past few months, there was a irregularity in garbage pickup from our neighborhood. Normally, all the garbage pickup trucks come in the 8AM every day, when everybody leave their garbage in predefined location as per your office orders. But for the past few months, trucks are coming in unscheduled time; someday at 7AM then other day at 1PM. This sort of irregularity is creating unsanitary condition and terrible smell for all the neighborhoods. Moreover, on a windy day, garbage spills into the road and create unbearable situation. Whole neighborhood is showing their discomfort with this issue and raising voice against the local council.
The ideal solution to mitigate the issue would be to arrange the pickups in a very timely fashion. Another thing can be done is to placing contained boxes to dump the garbage to prevent the spillage and ready to pick up by your team.
I believe this matter deserves your urgent attention otherwise whole neighborhood will raise their concern to mayor office, which will be harmful for your leadership among your area.
I look forward to your kind action.
Yours faithfully,
Abed Joy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that, in the past few months, there was a irregularity in garbage pickup from our...
^
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e garbage pickup trucks come in the 8AM everyday, when everybody leave their garbage in ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'box'?
Suggestion: box
...g can be done is to placing a contained boxes to dump the garbage to prevent the spil...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, moreover, so, then, another thing, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08520179372 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76343813383 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632286995516 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4034388366 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2307692308 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101559145486 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387817219581 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264818315258 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583606169112 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204885541599 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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