It is argued that, people today can do nothing for enhancement of the society, in can only be done by government and large organizations. I agree with this statement but, the innovation and ideas of individual and expenses by government go hand in hand.
For a start, everyone is aware of the problem of plastic, this issue was formaly illustrated by an Indian scientist when he claimed that kurkura an eatable containing plastic and then it came into concern of government they sued the company. As a result, kurkura was banned for almost an year and half until it was claimed clear. Therefore, the voice of an individual can do wonders in development of healthy and peaceful society. Furthermore, scores of individuals are on social media platforms today they have strong opinion for instance, once in chandigarh, the girl was sexually assaulted and the video on internet got viral, after that the single women protested for late night security of girls thus, police petroleum is available there. With the voice of one others are safe today.
Government and large corporations have sum of money they can spend on projects like statue of unity in India which is built for the memorial of valla bhai patel who worked for better realtion among nations. The statue building was actually an idea of the person of varansi, gujrat, India. Although, today it is one of the best tourist's place in India. That's why, individuals have equal share in development of countries like India, with there creative mindsets.
In conclusion, I believe that masses with strong willingness and strength of creative minds when comes along with the government and large companies will do nothing wrong but improve the actual living standard of individual society as whole.
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 78
- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003-2006. 67
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 84
- The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962,1985 and present) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...a result, kurkura was banned for almost an year and half until it was claimed clea...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...althy and peaceful society. Furthermore, scores of individuals are on social medi...
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one other', 'an other', or simply 'others'?
Suggestion: one other; an other; others
...m is available there. With the voice of one others are safe today. Government and large...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f the person of varansi, gujrat, India. Although, today it is one of the best tourists p...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ne of the best tourists place in India. Thats why, individuals have equal share in de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, so, then, therefore, thus, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02397260274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66054015499 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.2458545951 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210434991467 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834050193065 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112447293505 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151488092855 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103495895328 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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