Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
family is which can be anywhere people would have the sense of comfort, relax and belonging. family harmony allows people to ease main and release from serious stress, even keep the enthusiasm for life. however, it seems to be common to see that there is unlimited disputing and divergences on each member. this embarrassing and impulsive situation may happen when family members contain various opinions for the same things. these conflicts are caused by numerous sources, for example, Friedman and Greenhaus (2000) suggest that the lack of Self-awareness should be considered as the reason of family conflicts. these conflicts threat the relationship between people and are likely to be the potential reasons for some negative consequences. To consider the consequences, we need to group the parts influenced by the family conflicts into local, national and global, such as for government, the most severe problem caused by family conflicts is the lower marriage rate and fertility rate.
To solve this question, people have to recall and consider about what are the causes of family conflicts. people are different in terms of characters, religious belief, educational environments and culture. due to these differences, it is general to generate conflicts for a family which is composed by various people.
As a matter of fact, finance stress is seen as the primary problem that most family have to brave. every master of family is aware of that they should receive enough income to deal with cost in life which included necessity, tuition fee for children and so on hence they try their best to search for high-wage jobs even do multitask in one day. before spending, they have to think carefully about what they need, when they need it by and why they need it. this kind for people are afraid of the negative results and affects by this option and there is the one choice considered as the best one, so they always spend a long time on every cost option. During the thinking, they may be confused by too many trifling matters then hesitate. this long-term situation controls personal free and makes the negative emotion accumulate, then causes conflicts in family.
Also, not trust-worthy family member is a type of conflict source. family is a warm place which can provide people with deep happiness and quietness and makes them feel that they are loved by others. people can share their sadness and pressure with their family members, rely on them and solve problems together. this is an enjoyable process, however, sometimes the pleasant days would not happen due to anxiety, fear and distrust in a family. generally, people are not willing to communicate with their family if they believe that their family members cannot give them valuable and helpful suggestion even disrupt their thinking ways. this relationship model makes people feel lonely and stressful because they have to deal with all the things by themselves, thus they cannot find the meaning of home.
Except to not trust-worthy family, cultural difference is a general challenge in the international marriage. The most important thing should be awarded on the international marriage is that ’when you married your spouse, you married his or her culture, too’. there are hundreds of special country culture in the world, people who come from different countries are distinguished by lifestyle, religion, and habits. For example, harold L. Arnold shared his stories for cross-culture marriage with his wife, dalia. Once dalia lovingly offered to fix him chicken with gravy and harold was exciting because he almost could taste his grandmother's succulent smothered chicken with biscuits. however, when the time went to dinner, he found that Instead of the flour-based brown gravy that he was expecting, dalia used a tomato-based gravy common to Panamanian dishes. after the explanation, he finally realized that they use the same word ’gravy’ with a completely different set of expectations. there are numerous disappointed events due to cultural differences like this in the international marriage. these unsatisfied expectations are stored for a long time hence burst in the end. For some couples, it is difficult to surmount and understand the cultural differences because both parts have to abandon a few of their domestic culture to receive and adapt another culture.
Within a family, some negative consequences are caused by conflicts as the main source. For family members, frequent arguments seriously influence their mental health index, especially for children. if conflicts occur when children are still in the process of growing on body and brain, they would have continuously anxiety because the unsafe environment makes their mood be in a kind of fluctuant against condition. moreover, in some family with high degree of disharmony, children are always controlled activities and behaviors by abuse and violence, which severely affect their characters and there may be difficulties on cognitive ability for them. these young children who suffered by abuse, as a result, generally have mental problems such as depressive disorder. however, hating communication, losing confidence and feeling no matter, these what are the signals of mental problems, are usually neglected by children’s parents, so their illness just becomes more and more serious, in the end, some children may seek for narcotics to ‘improve’ temporarily, even choose to suicide. As for couples, most of them disappoint for the marriage after long-term family conflicts. The reason is that their expectation is not satisfied and begin to doubt the meaning of family. if the source of conflicts has not been identified and resolved, the family will gradually break up by living separately or divorce.
Recently, the japanese government has been plagued by the problem, low marriage rate, which is caused by the pressure after marriage. According to the latest annual survey by the Ministry of health, Labor, and Welfare, japan's birthrate and marriage rate arrived their lowest levels in 2017 since statistics began, in another blow to the country's shrinking population. A government research illustrated that only 607,000 couples got married this year, meaning there are 13,000 fewer than before. In japan, most local people point out that they cannot stop themselves from seeing the babies with strollers outside.
family: "Calibri",sans-serif;mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:ZH-CN;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">In japan, a younger generation only have two choices which are either delaying marriage or staying single for life. this phenomenon is justified by the 2015 national census, which showed a quarter of men and one in seven women will have never married in their lifetime. these young people are afraid of the pressure and conflicts after marriage: finance, job, cost for parents and children and so on. moreover, finding the balance between family and jobs is a long-term and rough task for japanese women. As more women continue their jobs after having the children, the cost of children, coupled with the lack of child-rearing support in business and the corporate world, has come under fire. Maintaining a work-life balance is a daunting task for japanese women, with strict working conditions, the stigma of maternity leave and waiting lists for accredited day care centers all obstacles to raising the birth rate. if business as usual, the number of children under 15 will more than halve to 6.85 million by 2065.
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also, finally, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, as for, for example, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 47.0 10.4138276553 451% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 28.0 7.30460921844 383% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 86.0 24.0651302605 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 149.0 41.998997996 355% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6584.0 1615.20841683 408% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1193.0 315.596192385 378% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51886001676 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.87705981579 4.20363070211 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.93819325244 2.80592935109 176% => OK
Unique words: 564.0 176.041082164 320% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472757753562 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2007.9 506.74238477 396% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
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Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106600168939 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289726384773 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028846216335 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635684382569 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358130282278 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 303.0 78.4519038076 386% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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