Dear Reema,
I hope this letter of mine finds you and your family in ravishing health. I am writing to invite you for a trip to Jaipur and Udaipur from 21st of March and returning on 25th Monday as my brother is not able to join the same.
All arrangements are already done, you have not to worry about anything. Actually, we both planned to escape this winter with the scenic views and beauty of Rajasthan, but unfortunately, due to his work commitments, his boss asked him to stay to handle a critical situation at production. However, he explained about the trip and the invested money for reservations, but could not resist the humble request from his boss. Anyway, we have booked a rental car for our trip, and the commencement of the journey will be from my home only on 21st. It will take four hours to reach our hotel, and in the evening we will start exploring the local market and historical areas. Next day we will visit the famous forts of Jaipur, the following day we travel for Udaipur and spend time exploring local museums and forts. On 24th we can do some more shopping and enjoy the rest of the day in spa activities at the hotel.
I believe you will be able to join me, please pack your bags accordingly, and let me know if you have some other plan before 20th.
Your Lovingly,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he humble request from his boss. Anyway, we have booked a rental car for our trip...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, anyway, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47916666667 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4116002928 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.283040833 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210028476534 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081086980966 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068203025723 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159205038948 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771785527918 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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