It is generally believed that one sole purpose of working deliberately is to earn more money. However, in my opinion, monetary perks are the not sole factors for working hard, there are several other aspects which could be driving source. In this essay, both perception of forth said will be discussed.
Firstly, it is inevitable that the major benefit of working tirelessly is to earn more financial help, also money is a vital part of one's livelihood. Moreover, even working for extra hours increases the chances of promotions and with that, the annual salary also increases. In fact, empirical research by Oxford University ascertained that around sixty percent of young employees work around eleven hours per day to earn more. It is apparent proof that people are ignoring their own health and happiness, in their race after the money.
On the other hand, monetory greed is not the only fuel for some to carry on, and work beyond their limits. Passion towards work is one utmost pleasure for some, for instance, a number of scientists, musicians, writers and many more strive for the best in their areas. In a piece of recent news by the prominent newspaper "The Guru", self-satisfaction, passion and reputation are the keys of brilliance for some famous personalities. Apart from this, philanthropy is another force for individuals, volunteering to help others by investing their time in service of others by an unconditional devotion for working extra hours.
In conclusion, although, it is a hard truth that most of the population work hard to earn money, it is not the only motivation for working hard other factors like respect, satisfaction and devotion are some more driving forces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ial help, also money is a vital part of ones livelihood. Moreover, even working for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11785714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81794314553 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.268782049 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232488442179 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886674988266 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590762165615 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157764266415 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054873591044 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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