In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Some people argue that the government should be responsible for covering the full cost of these services. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.
There is no doubt that a well-developed healthcare system with good educational infrastructure acts as strong pillars for a country. While it is observed that, authorities are partially covering these necessary expenses, others argue that a complete responsibility should be taken by them. I do not completely agree with the above mentioned views and will support my explanation with relevant examples.
On the one hand, hospitals and educational establishments play a crucial role in progress of nation. This is because, people should have a prompt well equipped medical support system, which can manage emergencies to save lives. For example, because I have ample knowledge about my health care rights, it can be used wisely whenever required for my family and myself. As a result, a sense of satisfaction and well- being is felt by my loved ones. In contrast, the council members should lay down laws and motivate citizens to pay their taxes and health- insurances on time.
On the other hand, leaders should focus on other aspects of a state’s development to boost its economy. The reason is that, importance should be given to improving technology and infrastructure which holds a justified place in any nation’s progress. For instance, a study done by the UK news channel reported that, significant financial growth was observed that helped the authorities to improve their health care facilities and provide more educational institutes for students. However, diseases have always led to a financial burden on any province and should be addressed as a priority. Therefore, whether healthcare or educational system both needs equal attention by residents as well as leaders, which in turn would lead the country on a path of progress.
In conclusion, while the administration should bear these necessary responsibilities, I believe that people can contribute to it by abiding by laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...both needs equal attention by residents as well as leaders, which in turn would lead the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32890365449 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13245171198 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1664409833 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197261050244 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618156784866 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402687024163 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114958735337 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288785921045 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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