TPO19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Knowledge plays a prominent role in people’s success and efforts to finding the best ways of improving this knowledge have been always among the top priorities. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is that whether people should use one source of news for become well-informed or they should use various sources of news. I, to a great extent, concur with the idea that people need to use different sources of news. The rationale behind this thesis will be elaborated by the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point that makes me hold this belief is that using different sources of information helps people to get news from different viewpoints. It goes without saying that every resource is controlled by a special organization and it is beneficial for people to get familiar with various aspects of news. For example, in my country, television is completely controlled by the government; thus, because of some considerations, they sensor many news or remove some details or even interpret them incorrectly and in the way that is beneficial for the countries' future. If people get their information just from the TV, they easily mislead and do not get accurate information and news.
Another reason deserving some words here is that when people gain information from various resources, they gain various knowledge in different field not only in limited number of area. Many resources are specialized for certain kinds of news and do not cover all the information. For example, some newspapers are especially for the sport news, some only for political events or some others are just for the weather and environmental issues. People just reading certain kind of newspapers like sport news, can improve a special realm which is sport, while other aspects of news are also really momentous in people's life and ignoring them makes people do not be informed about other areas. Therefore, for being well-informed people must get information from different resources.
Finally, yet importantly, obtaining information from various means helps people to enhance their knowledge about different tools and means of communications leading to making them informed people. In today's world, there are many instruments from which people can gain information, like television, radio, computer, cellphone, newspaper and many other tools. Working with this tools helps people to get familiar with the functions of the tools and how they can use them. They can gain invaluable knowledge and enhance their horizon. As I remember, in the first years that cellphones came to the bazaar, I forced my father to use cellphone for his communications. At first, my father was reluctant to use it. After few days that I showed the advantageous of cellphone to him, he was inclined to use it. He quickly got familiar with all the programs and applications of cellphone. Had my father not use the cellphone, he would not have known about it and how to use it.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned paragraphs, one can soon realize that in order to be knowledgeable, one must get information from different resources since not only can they get accurate information, but also they can get familiar with different areas and it helps people to get acquaintance with the means of communications as well. It is highly recommended that governments not underestimate the value of communicational tools for informing the society for having a prosperous country.
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- TPO26It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs. Agree or disagree? 73
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- TPO Extra1 People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co workers than from those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...use of some considerations, they sensor many news or remove some details or even int...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...use of some considerations, they sensor many news or remove some details or even interpre...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...aper and many other tools. Working with this tools helps people to get familiar with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2936.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 563.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21492007105 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97418027739 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460035523979 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 897.3 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6787145683 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4583333333 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242871183226 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815729549562 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903385289279 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161306308442 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558596312545 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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