Nature`s Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of plainsville and their prescience says that they are gonna be successful since the residents of these area lead a healthy lives. Their prognosis being based on these inadequate assumptions seems irrelevant. Some other analysis bolstering the above statement should be mentioned.
Firstly, the above argument is based on the assumption that the residents of Plainsville have healthy lifestyles so,they should open their new franchise in that area and they would be successful in the future. They should have considered other factors too . Is there any warrant that those people would buy the products from the same store? Would they be liking their products? Do they meet or satisfy their customer`s need? What if these possibilities would bring out pessimistic results in their future carrier? They should have factored out these possibilities that would help them make a better analysis for the establishment of their stability in that area.
Secondly, the argument talks about the high sales of the running shoes, exercise clothing, more people in the health clubs , weight training and aerobics classes. Opening the health store just because these above mentioned areas have high sales and imagining to be success in future seems so oafish. They have high sales on their own kind and their product might be so good that people from different areas might have come there to buy them and that might increased their sales.The Nature`s Way product might not match their lifestyles. People over there might have used other imported health products to meet their needs and these products might not be able to compete with those products. And since they might have been using the products of other store, they might not find it feasible to change the product putting their health at risk as their body have already adopted that product. So, some other studies have to be done further for the opening of the store so that their store bussiness could be perennial in coming days.
Lastly, the argument states the cursory factors they see in that area. They should have done some primary survey by being on that area knowing about the people`s lifestyle individually rather than just being stick on some secondary data and taking decisions on these factors. Indeed it would put them at risk if the store won`t be running properly. So, the argument have to cover up some other areas too to reach upto the conclusion.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 424 350
No. of Characters: 2075 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.538 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.894 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.291 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.557 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...na be successful since the residents of these area lead a healthy lives. Their prognosis b...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
... residents of these area lead a healthy lives. Their prognosis being based on these i...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...f Plainsville have healthy lifestyles so,they should open their new franchise in that...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...should have considered other factors too . Is there any warrant that those people ...
^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...roducts from the same store? Would they be liking their products? Do they meet or satisfy...
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Line 3, column 622, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help them make a better analysis for the establishment of their stability in that...
^^^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir stability in that area. Secondly, the argument talks about the high sales ...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lothing, more people in the health clubs , weight training and aerobics classes. O...
^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se above mentioned areas have high sales and imagining to be success in future se...
^^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagining being'.
Suggestion: imagining being
...ve mentioned areas have high sales and imagining to be success in future seems so oafish. They...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir own kind and their product might be so good that people from different areas...
^^
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...em and that might increased their sales.The Nature's Way product might not mat...
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Line 5, column 819, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t find it feasible to change the product putting their health at risk as their bo...
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Line 8, column 282, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
... and taking decisions on these factors. Indeed it would put them at risk if the store ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 28.8173652695 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09952606635 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50529432283 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478672985782 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2632143151 57.8364921388 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.70786347227 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278425253832 0.218282227539 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100318053298 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106934885909 0.0701772020484 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223969178805 0.128457276422 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13571930453 0.0628817314937 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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