I strongly agree with the speaker that significant advancement can`t be achieved unless outsiders bring their knowledge to that field of study. In this world of advancement, no knowledge can be confined within limited boundary. People explore different places out of their cities and nation to gain knowledge and this knowledge can advance in that field of study.Here are some examples that aptly illustrates the above statement.
Firstly,lets talk about the scientist whose innovations and research have given such a level of advancement in this world.They keep on experimenting on everything they are concerned about.From the milky way galaxy to the inner core of the earth,they have veneered abundant areas to expound their discoveries and innovations. They bringout the earthened findings to this world thereby leading to the advancement to that field of study. Their experience to that field of study provides a convinent knowledge and ways to deal with it. As a result,advancement is unstoppable.
Secondly, we can see various development related works being carried in various part of world. Lets talk about a such work carried out in underdeveloped country. The country people are usually illiterate and they lack knowledge about the technology and terminologies used in the development activities.And the help of experties from different parts of world are summoned. From those experties, people get chance to learn more about the works carried out.And we can see significant advancement in their knowledge and this actually helps to change their lifes.
Moreover,the more you spread knowledge,the more profound the person gets. In this world, every country are developing their economic status,living status,political status etc learning from eachother. If there were only few countries,there would me much less to learn about. People get knowledge and some experience from certain country and they implement that knowledge and experience in his country leading towards the advancement of his country. However,in some field, we can see that significant advancement are achieved from the insiders too. There is no hard and fast rule that the outsider are necessary for the advancement.People in America are very forward in advancement. They don`t need the knowledge and experience from outside.
So,in sum, i would say that if you want significant advancement in your field then the outsiders knowledge and their experienced can add aid to your work and the results can be splendid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47545219638 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17123646454 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509043927649 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7998929554 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.526315789 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42988198447 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136424153001 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13034188271 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26177787387 0.150359130593 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124660752739 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.