Has TV destroyed our life?
TV is humans one of the best invention ever. It is already part of our life. Ever since television appeared in our life, we have faced big changes. However, television has impact on people’s behavior not only positive, but negative too.
Since television appeared in our life, we love spending our time by watching kinds of movies and TV shows. Besides, television plays important role on most people’s life, because usually their life is boring without it. On the other hand, television is one the most popular entertainment and young couples love to go to romantic movies on weekends.
Secondly, television of the fastest way to announce the news and political changes. In addition, people love to follow the latest fashion and TV is always best option. The latest news around the world everyday on television from morning, but still the most popular one is advertising. Companies are spending millions of dollars to advertise their products and their products on TV every day. Therefore, many people have movie heroes and they watch their films with a great passion.
Thirdly, despite all the revolutionary changes of our life, still television has negative impact on people’s life. Since television appeared in our life, people started being less active. For example, young generation used to play different active games before television invented. Now they just prefer to watch movies and comics, as a result they do not growth up strong as their parents used to growth up. In addition, people used to sleep more, before the television appeared. With invention of television, people started to produce different kinds of fantastic movies that have negative impact on young people’s minds. For example, bringing back from the death, like it is temporary.
Television is still one of the human’s best invention. It is neutral for itself and depends on us how to use it. The choice is ours, if we use it correctly we can make life more easier.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-16 | mike10m1 | 70 | view |
| 2020-05-08 | Mohammed Hussein | 76 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...if we use it correctly we can make life more easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, second, secondly, still, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10185185185 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72469688197 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515432098765 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9743759693 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1363636364 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22534821312 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807399051434 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109465133475 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150796672831 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932208046725 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.