The escalate in population of urban areas has activate many timorous problems. Although serious problem have arisen as a result of this, there are solutions.
One of the first problem of the overcrowding is pollution in the environment due to deforestation and expose of harmful gases like methane, carbon-monoxide. For example, people cut down the trees and destroy the historical sites, so that they can built houses in the urban areas. There is no doubt that thus affects the atmosphere thereby causing global warming and lessen the historical importance, which is a negative impact to children and society. Another major problem is the rising in the unemployment rates in the cities. These days, there are numbers of people with high degree without jobs as a result of high competition among the candidates, which results in the violence and crime in the community.
It is important that action is taken to combat these problems. Government should ensure that adequate facilities and employment is provided to rural areas. For an instance, establishment of factory, schools and hospitals for these area's people with more job opportunities for adult in the area, adding to release their economic conditions and poor health. Government should also focus on the road construction and increase in agricultural products to uplift their stander of living. Individuals also have a part to play. They need to raise awareness program about the harmful effect of over population. In spite of having less facilities, many individual can use their knowledge in order to develop the village. while individuals of course have no big power, they can be assisted through political leaders to raise campaign for public.
To conclude, urban areas has different endorse to develop the place with flourishment in the facilities, but excess population has negative impact on society. However, with the right action by government and individual , it can be a safe place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
The escalate in population of urban areas has activa...
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Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'activated'.
Suggestion: activated
...calate in population of urban areas has activate many timorous problems. Although seriou...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
... the historical sites, so that they can built houses in the urban areas. There is no ...
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Line 5, column 623, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... of over population. In spite of having less facilities, many individual can use the...
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Line 5, column 713, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...wledge in order to develop the village. while individuals of course have no big power...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ight action by government and individual , it can be a safe place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, no doubt, of course, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25079365079 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87604435794 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5041112365 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193254981127 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562335734574 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472422264146 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113677786333 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338442351229 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.