Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, movie and other media entertainment has become a major part of people’s daily life. Few people feel that there is no necessity to watch a movie in a theatre as, they can now watch in the portable devices like tablet and desktop. Whilst, others believe that watching a movie in a cinema hall will give you a complete experience. In my perspective, I think it is good that we can watch films on our mobile or tablets but having said that, in some cases, it may not be effective.
There are several advantages of seeing a movie on our mobile device or tablets. Firstly, one of the key positives of watching on our devices is easy to watch and 24/7 accessible. For example: if you are a big movie geek and you watch a movie everyday then it will best for you, as you can watch any movie at any time at your ease. Secondly, it considered being less expensive compared to watching in a theater. For example streaming sites like Amazon, Netflix are providing the facility at very reasonable price and discounts for the people. Lastly, there no hassle of commuting as we need only a device and the internet connection to watch.
Having said that, there are instances where watching a film on the big screen will make the difference. For instance, there are movies which come in the 3 dimensional, IMAX and other technology which can be never experienced in our devices. For example, an animation movie will give you more impact on watching in cinema theater than on a tablet or mobile phones. Moreover, some people would prefer to watch their favourite actor movie along with their fans and tend to enjoy that ambiance.
To conclude, few people believe that they can watch movies on the phones and other portable devices instead of going to the theater whereas others felt that in order to have a complete experience it is better to watch in the cinema hall. In my point of view I believe it is a good alternative to view films on our devices, however, there are instances where it cannot be effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6295264624 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54694519051 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50139275766 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2188943112 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209978232044 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785558624137 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502719434503 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155328073864 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055808519131 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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