Dear Kenny,
I hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. I am writing to apologize for not being able to join you for the theater programme this weekend, that we have been planning from last month.
The reason for my disability is, last Sunday, I met an accident on the road and eventually broke my leg. I was unconscious when I was able to gather my sense and opened my eyes I was in the hospital. Doctors told me that I have a hairline fracture in my food so I need to take proper treatment for it and probably two weeks bed rest.
I am sorry for not being able to contact you early due to my medical circumstances. However, to remove your melancholy and lifting your mood, I have a plan to watch a movie marathon at my home this weekend. I will make all the arrangements with the help of my family and you can invite a few more friends.
On the other hand, I have contacted the theater agency they can cancel our reservations and take the tickets back, also money will be refunded after cutting minimal service charges. Hope to hear from you soon.
Take care,
Sonia
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38647342995 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42346499281 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1745924348 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241442728129 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893256964773 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556984006546 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152300972666 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692147454755 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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