You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.Write a letter to the manager of the company. In you letter,1. provide information about yourself2. give details of your previous work experience3. say why the company should c

Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope you are doing well, the purpose of writing this missive is to apply for the position of "DevOps Lead" in your company.

I have overall eight years of experience in DevOps engineering, Apart from this, I have Master's in Computer Application from IIT, Delhi. Basically, I am from Delhi only and live in Sarita Vihar with my wife and parents. Previously I was associated with "Hewlett Parker" company for six years, where I was responsible for Cloud implementation and automation with the use of technologies like AWS, Jenkins, Ansible etc. I have good expose of onshore client meetings and proved my skills to tackle complicated issues. Currently, I am working at Accenture Gurugram and handling the team of eight person.

I could be a great asset for your company, because of my skill set, I am well qualified and achieved many awards for my deliberation and proven success.

I would like you to consider me for this job, looking for your prompt replay,

Thank you,
Your Faithfully,
ABC

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...Gurugram and handling the team of eight person. I could be a great asset for your c...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...achieved many awards for my deliberation and proven success. I would like you ...
^^
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your prompt replay, Thank you, Your Faithfully, ABC
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09248554913 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91217062447 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1590587539 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.125 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190065129164 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745086055016 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766112745637 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121388569559 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591510541559 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.