The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist ficilities.
The two maps are given show the same island, before and after the built of some tourist communities.
According to the first map, there is an adequated island which has a beach in the west with approximately two hundreds and fifty meter lenght.
In the second map, it can be seen that there are two diverse available accomodation blocks that one of them is located in the east of the beach and another is in the middle of the island which are related together by footpath. In addition, there is a big restaurant which is constructed in the north and has been connected to a central reception with vehicle truck. Besides, there is a pier in the south that seems a station for boating.
Overall, althogh the lenght of the island has not been tramsmited, there are many remarkable evolutions between these two maps due to running some tourist constructions which make the island more sophicticated than before.
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Sentence: The two maps are given show the same island, before and after the built of some tourist communities.
Description: A verb, past participle is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to given and show
entence: According to the first map, there is an adequated island which has a beach in the west with approximately two hundreds and fifty meter lenght.
Error: adequated Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: lenght Suggestion: length
Sentence: In the second map, it can be seen that there are two diverse available accomodation blocks that one of them is located in the east of the beach and another is in the middle of the island which are related together by footpath.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
Sentence: Overall, althogh the lenght of the island has not been tramsmited, there are many remarkable evolutions between these two maps due to running some tourist constructions which make the island more sophicticated than before.
Error: althogh Suggestion: although
Error: tramsmited Suggestion: transmitted
Error: sophicticated Suggestion: sophisticated
Error: lenght Suggestion: length
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 734 1000
No. of Different Words: 92 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.646 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.59 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.707 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.489 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.808 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4