Life is very fast and a lot of people face situations where they have to make decisions. Some people like to take their decisions alone; others make their decisions with others. Personally, I prefer not to make an important decision alone. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Making an important decision alone could be fatal. Choosing a major, study field, or a place to travel is difficult and most of the time people who make their decision alone regret their choice in the future. My experience is a good compelling example. When I graduated from high school, I was not sure what major I have to study. I applied for several schools such as medicine, pharmacy, computer science, and engineering science. After that, I got acceptance on the pharmacy school. Now, I am a pharmacist. I really regret the choice that I did not listen to my father or adviser. They told me, try to study medicine because I was really good at practical things such as physical examination, but I did not listen to them. I wanted to decide what I want to study. Now, my physician's friends are really rich people and own homes and luxury cars, however, I still rent an apartment and have a lease for my car.
Listening to others could open your mind while taking the decision to choose the right. Sometimes people under stress do not think properly. So, talking with friends, parents who you trust in making a decision is a good strategy to relieve stress and help you to take the right decision. For instance, I had to buy a car last year. I really needed a car because my old car was in bad shape. Therefore, I was in stress in how I can choose the right car. I talked to my friends and they advise me to try hybrid cars. They told me you will save a lot of money. Thanks to my friend that I bought a Toyota hybrid, otherwise, I thought to buy 6 cylinder car that would consume much gas.
Frankly speaking, sometimes you do not have time to ask for help in making a decision, so you have to take it alone. In this situation, you have to take a deep breath three times and try to be on the save side. For example, recently my supervisor asked me to respond to him within five min weather to travel to a conference next week or not. I took a deep breath, and I thought if I decided not to travel, I would not get a promotion next month. So, thanks to the strategy of taking a deep breath. I just get a promotion last week.
All in all, I strongly believe that making a decision should not be alone. This is because deciding alone could be fatal, but you will open your mind if you ask for help to take the right one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 649, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'car' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cars'.
Suggestion: cars
... otherwise, I thought to buy 6 cylinder car that would consume much gas. Frankly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, frankly, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34607645875 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41402745461 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480885311871 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4211342964 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.53125 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162645440711 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435129382258 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658817527195 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109481982285 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541920883785 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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