Essay topics: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear Ema
It is lovely to hear from you after such long time. In response to your letter I would suggest you not to join college as you probably would not be able to enjoy college as much because microbiology as stream is very academic and quite research oriented.
In my view you should look out for a job and work towards getting a real experience. In addition to that organization always prefer someone who have had actual field work done than just bookish knowledge.
Ema, you have always been good at Software Programming. You should get in the field of Information Technology and develop software solutions. Secondly, you can also join teaching job as you have always interested in sharing your intellect with others, I get all nostalgic thinking about how you taught entire hostel students a night before the exam, as a result of which everyone pass the exam next day.
Take care, Hope to see you soon. Feel free to get in touch with me if you need my help.
Lots of love
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...work towards getting a real experience. In addition to that organization always pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64971751412 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42880035164 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5605872733 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313544488932 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11340069921 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785777896719 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176395929464 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365236942481 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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