Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others thinks that
intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
According to some fragment of the society it is argued that intelligent can measure by being success while other have a contradictory view point that intelligent can be measured in some other ways. As such there are both merits and demerits of this apprehension, In my opinion, this is statement is warrented. there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prominent one is that, as it is calimed being success is not only an measuremet for intelligent. it should combine other elements of key points to elaborate the accomplishment in life such as emotions and thinking patterns.
Moreover, factual evidence of enhancement of completing tasks could be witness with the gurantee of being intelligent. Apart from that, broad minded and kindness pave the way to realise about gaps and limits to be a better servent of the globe with a compassionate heart. To be a intelligent person, he or she should be a kind person to spread love and keep the social bond.
Furthermore, most of us have sense that adoptive for any kind of situations is another measurement for being intelligent. this process will catalyst peoples lifestyle who are still suffering from starvation, injustice and marginalization to rise above their genes. Understanding each other and quick thinking are also another valid meassuring point of being a smart person. Rather than all the mentioned key points, Education is the most valuable aspect.
To sum up, in the view of the argument outlined above, I can conclude that to measure intelligent, success is not the only measurement. people should consider more on other key points to be a better person of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, apart from, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98916967509 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95097592964 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5699847714 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336202132995 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977500554778 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100743086456 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199365191524 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107453317004 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.