Many people today use their phone for sending texts more than talking.
What are the reason for this?
Are there more advantage or disadvantage?
Today cell phones are a major part of our life. It has made things more convenient by enabling us to communicate with each other in small amount of time. One of the most used functions today on the phone is not calling, but instant text messaging. Texting message is an easy and discrete way of communication with others but can also cause few problems physically and mentally.
Eventhough everyone use their phone all the time, there are certain places which does not permit us to receive calls, in such situation text helps us to keep updated. Text messages does not lead to noise or any kind of disturbance to people sitting next to us, unless phones are on silent mode and the text messages also acts as evidence or proof in court of law. It does not need immediate response to the sent text, it can be viewed as per the convenience and replied by receiver accordingly. With an advancement in technology like read receipt, auto correct, grammar rectification, language translation there is increased uptrend in text messaging.
Text message are acknowledged of having some disadvantage albeit it do have several merits. As in most situation it is not possible to get instant response and shall also has a probability of misunderstanding as the text message may be interpreted differently by each individual. Teens these days text while driving which has caused a serious issue in the society, however this can be curbed to the possible extent.
In conclusion, the text message has several advantage as compared to its drawback, with an improved communication, multiple languages and awareness these drawbacks can be curtailed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Today cell phones are a major part of our life. It has made thin...
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Message: Did you mean 'scent'?
Suggestion: scent
...does not need immediate response to the sent text, it can be viewed as per the conve...
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Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...d of having some disadvantage albeit it do have several merits. As in most situati...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...erently by each individual. Teens these days text while driving which has caused a s...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several advantages'.
Suggestion: several advantages
... In conclusion, the text message has several advantage as compared to its drawback, with an im...
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Suggestion:
...proved communication, multiple languages and awareness these drawbacks can be cur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01465201465 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8985494033 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0751926545 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166822141258 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631043032856 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03694109683 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094625320657 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037657107988 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.