The given bar graph illustrates oscillation day folks go to restaurants to eating fast food item.This bar graph information on decade period.
In normal day people are reraly go on restaurant because of work.Then after coming in weekday most of human monotonous study or job to planning to go on restaurant I 2003 to 2013 around value 15% to 20% spend on time.In medium class family once a week way highest people on eat in fast food outside the home town.In twice a month 2003 human 30% of outside going on restaurant In 2013 years approximately 33% time expand on delicious food.In years information restaurant 13 to 15 percentage decade years same, but never human going on restaurant 5 percentage touched the sky.
To conclude, beginning 3 different years holiday upcoming among the weekly to years the bar graph staring make shape on half circle.
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- Writing task 1 ielts liz 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...to restaurants to eating fast food item.This bar graph information on decade period....
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...reraly go on restaurant because of work.Then after coming in weekday most of human m...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...3 around value 15% to 20% spend on time.In medium class family once a week way hig...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'way the highest'.
Suggestion: way the highest
...time.In medium class family once a week way highest people on eat in fast food outside the ...
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Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... eat in fast food outside the home town.In twice a month 2003 human 30% of outside...
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Line 2, column 438, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ately 33% time expand on delicious food.In years information restaurant 13 to 15 p...
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Line 2, column 438, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ately 33% time expand on delicious food.In years information restaurant 13 to 15 p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90344827586 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71806393991 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.272204192 43.030603864 479% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.0 112.824112599 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.3333333333 22.9334400587 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157768457527 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902940600153 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518641720534 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902940600153 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518641720534 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.2329268293 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 61.2550243902 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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