It is difficult for people in the cities getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes and salutation?
There are well beyond technology is really hardwork reduce and people get sit in office work there led to getting sever consequences effect on folks. In this essay i will discuss causes and behinds the solution.
On the one hand , human can not deying used of technology but technology reduced hardwork than people day by day more lazy feel and they can not doing hardwork this reason to direct effect on body loss , diseases,immunity system low other so on. They life expantence has been reduced. In urban area there are not more spot in exercise in home , flat and residence space. They surrounding atmosphere are very poor and people tired with far away distance to go they work and return to coming home they have not enough time spend with outdoor activities.Urban area there are not space between indoor and outdoor activities. All cities are engulf with business , factorise and home.Human leisure time to spend sleep, entertainment , video game and the sendentary activities do.
On the other hand , awareness program should be conduct among the people . People free time to spend outdoor activities with families and friend circulars . There are some inspiration book readout to do themselves take decision some time expand with exercises.
I pen down saying that , urban area technology also led to solution but reduced hardwork they can not be ignored but take yourself effort to do physical exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09051724138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.687470858 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8793290022 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118190613291 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423065851674 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342550216054 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778259613392 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349896945665 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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