The chart below shows the total amount of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2000
In this century communication is easier than before. we use different way for contact each other. this chart illustrate whole minutes of phone calls in the UK which is categorised in three group (local- fixed line, national and internationalfixed line and mobile), from 1995 to 2002.
As it is shown in this figure, the most regular way for communication is local-fixed line. after that is national and international-fixed line and the last one is mobile phone. If you see the trends during 1995 to 2002, you will see local fixed line interest increased untill 1999 and after that its decreased because of new technology which is replaced with it.
On the other hand using national and internatiol- fixed line increased during 1995 to 2002, but it's trend slightly increased. Also, cell phone consumer increased quickly, because of improving technology and it is taken other communication market.
overall, between 1995 and 2002, the most important method of communication is local-fixed line, after that is national and international- fixed line and the third method is mobiles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24137931034 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06521791073 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1751560954 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0748073882051 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325036040129 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648261639875 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554559196722 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600574235652 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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