Do you agree or disagree: young people should try many different kinds of jobs or career before they decide the long term career of their life.
First of all, having experience in different field and disciplines make us versatile job candidate who are better able to compete with other people desiring to have the same job. For example, it goes without saying that an individual with a variety of skills in different languages, computer, time-managing and so forth can catch the attention of any potential employer. In the present time, different kinds of jobs are inter-connected and having experience, both academic and hands-on, is indispensable. it is not exaggerating to say that, it is almost impossible to find a decent job without having a hand in profuse kinds of competencies and specialties.
Secondly, trying different fields and endeavoring to experience different work spheres, help us to broaden our social circles and thus will significantly enhance our chance of finding a lucrative and decent vocation when we want to enter the work market. For example, when I was a university student, I participated in three internship courses that were very helpful for me. before then I was a student who only cared about academic courses and I did not know how much it is important to get familiar with other people, especially those who work in different fields. Grate gratitude toward one of those internship courses, which surprisingly was not pertinent to my major, I found a well-payed prestigious job in an international company.
Thirdly, possessing skills in multiple areas is something that will improve our productivity and efficiency at our work. For example, an employee who has a widespread knowledge in computer science is more likely to have an accurate and dependable accounting for his company as compared to another worker who wants to make the calculations without the help of a computer. To further explain, a multilanguage worker can make a relationship with international companies and increase the company's chance of success in the sophisticated current work market.
To sum up, having experience in different fields before making our final choice about our jobs will open our eyes to various fields, make us a competitive and productive job candidate. Equally important, trying different fields will broaden our network with employers and enhance our job opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27625570776 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05315000339 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536529680365 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8136762722 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4375 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126128986352 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443849981541 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400917169077 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740653056027 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410709769741 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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