You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sally,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to inform you that I won’t be able to start an English course scheduled next week due to some problems at my office. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I am travelling to Singapore for an important communication event which is scheduled next week. Although I tried to reschedule my travel the company management wants me to travel as our company is launching a new product at the event. Additionally, I have a few business meetings aligned with telecom suppliers to discuss future strategy and penetration in enterprise markets. Hence due to these problems, I am unable to start the course in March.
Hence I would suggest to realign me with a fresh batch in mid of April as I will be back in India at that time. I look forward to your response and seeing you when I join the course.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
^^^
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion event which is scheduled next week. Although I tried to reschedule my travel the com...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 391, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... and penetration in enterprise markets. Hence due to these problems, I am unable to s...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...unable to start the course in March. Hence I would suggest to realign me with a fr...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest realigning'.
Suggestion: suggest realigning
...t the course in March. Hence I would suggest to realign me with a fresh batch in mid of April a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64556962025 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74575607329 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1658965038 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269402466311 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954972641244 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732969639028 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166458134877 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808800384718 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.