People sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What’s are the effects on them?
It is observed that, the amount of sleep people used to have in earlier days has decreased to great extent as of now. The main reasons behind it is, people have to work for more hours and this has resulted into fatigue.
Nowadays, competition has grown in almost every fields. This means, people have to work for extra hours to be in lead amongst their fellow colleagues. Thus, people compromise with their sleep and put extra hours to gain more knowledge and other skills which would help them to become unique from fellow workers. Eventually, the time is diverted in other activities rather than in taking quality amount of sleep.
There are many adverse effects due to lack of sleep. Firstly, less sleep will make a person tired, as the body cannot recover from the wear and tear that is gone throughout the day. Moreover, people would feel sleepy while working at office. Eventually, it will result into less productivity, as people cannot work effectively with such a tired state of mind as well as body.
Secondly, the another serious effect on body and mind due to lower amount of sleep is aging. Sleep helps the body to rejuvenate and recover from the damages. Hence, sleep is a primary cure for the body to recover from minor injuries. People’s body pwould start decaying is they are unable to get proper amount of sleep.
To recapitulate, although it is essential to become successful in this era of competition, however people should not be deprived of sleep. Otherwise, the consequences such as fatigue and aging of body can become fatal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'colleagues'.
Suggestion: colleagues
...extra hours to be in lead amongst their fellow colleagues. Thus, people compromise with their sle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85074626866 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4573211566 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563432835821 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1488362543 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22586066686 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721113118704 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412271108067 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120160927346 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306178496724 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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