Essay topics:
MUSIC or SCHOOL as Future Career
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- You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you.Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there, describe what you saw, and offer to take your friend there. 70
- Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important 56
- MUSIC or SCHOOL as Future Career 70
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is the better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
- You celebrate your birthday party with some friends last week in a restaurant It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them Mention the food service and the atmosphere Also sug 74
Sentence: However, we decided need an education.
Description: A verb, past tense is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to decided and need
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.742 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.508 7.5
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 1767 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.162 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.742 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.508 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.452 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5