Essay topics:
MUSIC or SCHOOL as Future Career
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- MUSIC or SCHOOL as Future Career 70
- A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. 88
- You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you.Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there, describe what you saw, and offer to take your friend there. 70
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 62
- Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. The others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss both view do you agree with? 60
Sentence: However, we decided need an education.
Description: A verb, past tense is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to decided and need
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.742 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.508 7.5
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 1767 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.162 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.742 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.508 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.452 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5