Essay topics:
The proportion of the population aged 65 and over in different countries between 1940 and 2040
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Sentence: In general, it can be seen from the graph that the proportion of population age 65 and over were increase slightly from a hundred year.
Description: A verb 'to be', past tense, 2nd person singular or all is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to were and increase
Sentence: Then, in 1980, that was fell slowly until in 2020.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to was and fell
Sentence: Moreover, that was decrease gradually in around 1990.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to was and decrease
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 221 200
No. of Characters: 982 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.856 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.443 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.534 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.118 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.402 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.615 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4