The proportion of the population aged 65 and over in different countries between 1940 and 2040

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The proportion of the population aged 65 and over in different countries between 1940 and 2040

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Sentence: Conversely, japan declined by two percent from 5 percent in 1960 and remained stable in 20 years after.
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Sentence: In 2019 later, America is predicted to become stable and will goes up slowly in 2020.
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 218 200
No. of Characters: 1021 1000
No. of Different Words: 121 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.843 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.683 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.484 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.769 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.363 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.693 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.122 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4