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Some people say that debt to bank the best choice than looking for a job to obtain money. Discuss both of them and give your opinion!
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Nowadays,
Sentence: Many reason people debt money to Bank.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and debt
Sentence: To be different with get money from the Bank, money from a job will not problem.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to with and get
Sentence: We need money every step our life.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to step and our
Sentence: However, many methods to obtain money, we are always to ready confront the consequences.
Description: The fragment are always to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace always with adjective
Description: The word ready is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to ready
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Avg. Sentence Length: 11.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.147 7.5
No. of Different Words: 144 200
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 33 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1562 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.165 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.062 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.147 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.192 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5