The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012.
The chart depict the crime changes in 3 different areas in Newport city in 2003-2012.
burglary peaked in 2004 by almost 4000 incidents. after 2004 the numbers dropped consistently to just above 1000. In 2009 to 2012 levelled around 1500 the events.
In 2003 to 2005 car theft was constant just below 3000. A decline happened, 700 episodes less was registered from 2005 to 2006. From 2006 to 2009 the numbers stayed the same nearby 2000. after 2009 the numbers rose until 2012 from right above 2000 to about 3000 successively.
The robberies remained almost stable around 500 circumstances from 2003 to 2012.It describes the small statistic of problems occurred in Newport city.
In conclusion burglary and car theft had the major incidents registers in the period. However, robbery was practically stable with the lower representation of problem reported during the same period between 2003-2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'depicts'.
Suggestion: depicts
The chart depict the crime changes in 3 different areas ...
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Suggestion: Burglary
...areas in Newport city in 2003-2012. burglary peaked in 2004 by almost 4000 incidents...
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Suggestion: After
...eaked in 2004 by almost 4000 incidents. after 2004 the numbers dropped consistently t...
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Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eaked in 2004 by almost 4000 incidents. after 2004 the numbers dropped consistently t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...he numbers stayed the same nearby 2000. after 2009 the numbers rose until 2012 from r...
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Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he numbers stayed the same nearby 2000. after 2009 the numbers rose until 2012 from r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...2000 to about 3000 successively. The robberies remained almost stable around ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...und 500 circumstances from 2003 to 2012.It describes the small statistic of probl...
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Suggestion:
...d 500 circumstances from 2003 to 2012.It describes the small statistic of problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63141182272 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1371029875 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5454545455 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1818181818 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254345477211 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983850846784 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15396913985 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178585366372 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198819036704 0.0819641961636 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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