Do agree or disagree with following statement? people should something do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
Obviously, many people do what that they are happy to work. If we do to work with happy, something that feel weight will feel easy. I can totally disagree with the statement that people should something do things that they do not enjoy doing. In the following paragraph I will try to support my answer with some reasons and examples.
First of all, I would say that in job, we need totality in job. Each person sure needs money and to receive it, sometimes they have to work because to live they need money that possible one of reason people work. In job, we demanded to do job with loyalty and work hard. We feel happy when we do job with hobby. For example, someone has job but the job no match with him. He does it only to get money and he work cannot loyalty. Accordingly, no seldom he work with feel lazy and job that easy will feel weight.
Besides that, he work without feel commitment to himself or company whereas the commitment very important in job. With commitment in job, they become success however if they have not commitment to job. They feel their days always have problems. Their friends at office become cannot like with his or maybe they eschew from his. It is because seldom discussion about job at their office. As a result they always be angry by head or customer, his life feel bored and feel burdened while the happen continuous maybe they will fired. Accordingly, many people are sometimes because burdened job at their office, they return home, they wreak to their feeling for their family such as domestic violence.
In conclusion, when people do not enjoy with what that they do, they will feel burdened. So, I have solution, do what that you like and like what that you work. The sentence will you are enjoy about everything that you do.
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Sentence: Each person sure needs money and to receive it, sometimes they have to work because to live they need money that possible one of reason people work.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to person and sure
Description: The fragment that possible one is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace possible with adverb
he work cannot loyalty.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and loyalty
Sentence: Accordingly, no seldom he work with feel lazy and job that easy will feel weight.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to with and feel
Sentence: Besides that, he work without feel commitment to himself or company whereas the commitment very important in job.
Description: The fragment he work without is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace work with verb, past tense
Sentence: Their friends at office become cannot like with his or maybe they eschew from his.
Description: The word his is not usually used as a pronoun, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to his
Sentence: It is because seldom discussion about job at their office.
Description: The fragment because seldom discussion is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace seldom with adjective
Sentence: As a result they always be angry by head or customer, his life feel bored and feel burdened while the happen continuous maybe they will fired.
Description: The fragment will fired . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace fired with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to the and happen
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to will and fired
Sentence: Accordingly, many people are sometimes because burdened job at their office, they return home, they wreak to their feeling for their family such as domestic violence.
Description: The fragment are sometimes because is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace sometimes with adjective
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.335 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
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Score: 16 in 30
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 320 350
No. of Characters: 1406 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.394 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.12 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.335 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.476 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.233 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5