Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive development?
The importance of small shopping malls, which frequently generated a great deal of heated debate, has recently become even more controversial. some proponents claimed it is positive that large shopping malls are replacing small local stores, while others believe these local stores are still important to local communities. this essays will elaborate on how large shopping malls are beneficial and how local stores are still necessary.
At the outset, there are various reasons why some people believe that the replacement of large shopping malls to small local stores is a positive trend but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that these malls have stimulated buying and selling activities that lead to accelerating the development of countries' economy. Particularly, it provides a competitive market where customers can find a good price for their wish list and sellers can promote their best products. Besides, these provide numerous choices from commodities to luxurious things that consumers can buy in this open market. Thus, the role of central markets like this is indispensable for the improvement of the economic value.
On the other hand, some opponents claim that small local stores are essential for a majority of people. In fact, most people do not want to go to huge shopping malls frequently because they are often located far away from residential areas. For example, if you have to buy eggs, flour or some ingredients for your urgent needs, you will most likely go to the closest grocery stores instead of driving to a mall. due to its convenience, local stores are unable to be replaced, even with the rising of large shopping malls.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, from my personal perspective, I am inclined to believe that small local shops are still useful for many people and they should exist due to very high demand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14379084967 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6906282801 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.192092808 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315589047254 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117676653013 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104812501902 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195025640826 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887743233439 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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