You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:
• explain where you live
• describe the problem
• give reasons why you do not want this development.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir, or Madam,
I live in Murray, north east side of Queensland and this town is just 15 km from Brisbane Domestic Airport. I am writing this letter to show the dark side of proposed rebuilding plan of airport that would not only affect to our natural habitance but also uplift number of other problems.
To start with, Green Park is the only but lavish park area near to my town. At evening and holidays, children and grandparents used to go there to play and strengthen their social bonds consecutively. Unfortunately, new development plan will occupy that area and there...
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Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on the recent decision taken by Bengaluru airports authority (BAA) to expand the local airport and number of flights.
I am living in Devanahalli village which is located 2kms from the local airport. The primary source of income for people in my village is agriculture. When the initial plan was made to construct an airport, it was agreed that villagers will give the northeastern part of the barren land for the airport construction, since the land is not suitable for agriculture.
But currently, for the airport expansion, the decision has been made to acquire the northern part of the land which is suitable for paddy cultivation. We agree that development is important but not at the cost of agriculture. Secondly, since the runway is closer to our village, we are already facing severe noise pollution. But BAA stated that they are increasing the local flights, if this happens, we will prone to face more health issues due to noise pollution.
So, I kindly request you to understand the concern and publish the news about the problems stated above, so that the government can reassess the possibilities.
Hoping to do the needful.
Thanks,
Harsha Vardhan
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 219 200
No. of Characters: 1051 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.847 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.799 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.583 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.583 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4