Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us new avenues while keeping ourselves update with latest news and current affairs. Therefore, a fair amount of people believe, a conventional way of newspaper reading will be disappeared.I do not completely accord on it because conventional newspaper are easiest and cheapest way to get news.
To embark on, there are multiple reasons why the traditional ways of getting news are still popular. First of all, reading newspaper has become ardent habit of many people. Everyone whether from affluent or middle class are seen desperately waiting for paper in morning and enjoy it reading with cup of tea.Moreover, these are the portable, cheapest an easiest way of knowing about the global activities. It can be carried from one place to other in bag and available at economical price. It is so handy and merely by continuing flip of pages can make you omniscient. Secondly,electricity and other appliances are not required. Moreover,the other attachments are like icing on the cake. For instance, the Hindustan times has multiple attachments like women’s fashion, career guide, culinary art and so on.
However, undoubtedly, technology has given the radical approach to reading news, for example, videos provide full and clear view to reading besides that we can download, share and forward it to our relatives and friends. Needless to say that techno phobic will be having no place in this ever-advanced modern world.
To conclude, the lives of people are drastically affected by advanced versions of technology yet, in my opinion, it will not be able to pose threat to the existence traditional newspaper and magazines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...f newspaper reading will be disappeared.I do not completely accord on it because ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'ANSWER' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'answers'.
Suggestion: Answers
... get news.IELTS WRITING TASK 2 QUESTION ANSWER To embark on, there are multiple rea...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ng and enjoy it reading with cup of tea.Moreover, these are the portable, cheapest an ea...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...eover, these are the portable, cheapest an easiest way of knowing about the global...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , electricity
... pages can make you omniscient. Secondly,electricity and other appliances are not required. ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...er appliances are not required. Moreover,the other attachments are like icing on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31386861314 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06261576486 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64598540146 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.4382808071 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140501676707 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422965981976 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508235725984 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947419466986 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435563388656 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.