Dear Mr. Smith,
I like to apologize for missing the career counseling appointment this Saturday, 11th April. I am writing for your forgiveness a rescheduling the appointment.
Allow me to explain the main reason for not attending the meeting. I was ready for our meet on the day, but suddenly my mother fainted in the house and in the hurry I bring her to the hospital. Later, the doctor said it was due to high seasonal fever, but now her condition is fine. In that rush to the hospital, I even forget to inform you.
As you know, It is my final year of college and like everyone else I am also have perplex feelings, you have suggested to me that this counseling could help me to choose a beneficial career. It is my humble request if you could reschedule the appointment, as you know how this meeting is important for directing my future.
I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. I would like to have the next appointment on any day next week
Yours Sincerely,
Anna Mathew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ollege and like everyone else I am also have perplex feelings, you have suggested to...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'perplexed'.
Suggestion: perplexed
...e and like everyone else I am also have perplex feelings, you have suggested to me that...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57458563536 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67053787362 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3266661156 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191468009901 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806540646409 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712109125233 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124007128052 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957412041256 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.