Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words.
The percentage of school boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.
The table shows data on the proportion of school aged boys in two age groups taking part in 5 kinds of sport in the UK in 2010.
Overall, boys age 6-11 do more activities of each group (except for swimming). In addition, football was the most popular kinds of sport for both age groups.
The proportion of boys in the 6-11 age group was highest, at about 87%. The figures for basketball and cricket were lower, at about 35% and 45% respectively. Around 23% of boy age 6-11 group taking part in rugby, compared to about 19% of the older age group who liked swimming.
The figure for people who liked football in the 12-16 age group was highest, at about 78%. The proportion of boys in 12-16 age group spent a significantly higher proportion on basketball and cricket, which accounted for 25% and 34% respectively. The figure for swimming was lowest, at only 19%.
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- Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevantYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.The percentage of school boys in two different age groups who participated in 67
- Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevantYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.The percentage of school boys in two different age groups who participated in 61
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 11
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...accounted for 25% and 34% respectively. The figure for swimming was lowest, at only...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for swimming was lowest, at only 19%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49207693512 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.975896643 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189284837618 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974982575926 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052594561861 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133215103431 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445849880106 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.