Some people say that government should brake down all the historical building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree.
Some masses believe that the all ancient structure should be destroyed by the government in order to replace it with new modern style buildings. I believe that government should protect it because it will provide the information about the culture of the past years.
Once the structure is damaged then all the information get erased thus, for the future generation it is important to preserve these architecture. However, what community thinks does not matters what matters is the importance of these treasure which will reflect our ancestors history. These helps us to understand about how the life was in the past and how they had lived. What they used to build those structure.These ancient buildings will help to understand the value of culture and people who build it in such period of time. These can be the world heritage site in future or the wonders of world that give pride for the nation.
On the other hand, these buildings will introduce large number of tourism activities inside the country. It will help to generated the foreign currency and rise our economy of the country. Even though these are the old, still these buildings will attracts thousands of tourist. It will help to create the employment opportunities among the local community and it can bring the reorganization among the world. The local product of the area get promoted people life style can uplift through these buildings. If these building are destroyed and modern buildings will be built then the country will look like the concert jungle where there is no beauty nor any view of the surrounding.
To sum up, I believe that these architect will help to create various of opportunities among community and helps to preserve the information and culture of history.
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| 2019-04-10 | Rihav Raj Acharya | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this architecture' or 'these architectures'?
Suggestion: this architecture; these architectures
... generation it is important to preserve these architecture. However, what community thinks does no...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'matter'
Suggestion: matter
...However, what community thinks does not matters what matters is the importance of these...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...What they used to build those structure.These ancient buildings will help to understa...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...culture and people who build it in such period of time. These can be the world heritage site i...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...are the old, still these buildings will attracts thousands of tourist. It will help to c...
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Line 5, column 683, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...beauty nor any view of the surrounding. To sum up, I believe that these architec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, then, thus, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6434983882 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508532423208 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6730483085 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128586494854 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503779865398 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743264777228 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934794259507 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921371507107 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.