Many people try to look younger than their age.
What are the reasons people do this.
Do you think is a good thing or a bad thing?
It is thought by some that an increasing number of people are tend to look younger than their real age. In my opinion, people want to look younger as it is beneficial and this is positive development as it means that people have a good health.
Firstly, it must be admitted that nowadays more and more people tend to look younger than their real age because it is beneficial for all aspects of their life. For example, when people have young appearance it is easier for them to find new work. When managers looking for employees for sales positions, they firstly pay attention to the appearance because sales representatives works with public and if person is good looking he has more chances to secure a job. Furthermore, people feel themselves happier when they look younger. In addition, people who looks younger usually have good health.
This is positive development as in order to look younger people firstly should take care of their health. People with young appearance usually conduct a balanced diet and do not consume junk foods, alcohol and do not smoke. Moreover, they have to go in sports on a daily basis as sport also help to look younger. Consequently, when the majority of people look younger it can motivate other people to look younger and have a healthy life style.
In conclusion, many people want to look younger as it helps them to succeed in their life and this is positive trend as it is beneficial for their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74603174603 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51773752952 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484126984127 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0138865932 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357494530466 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165707531301 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681924193054 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261172198189 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478939439573 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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