Briefly pointing out to the key, in my perspective, it is hard to survive into the society without having friends. Friends are those who can help us acquire the needs, and reach to the top levels. But the point is that, it might be arduous to find such friends, realistically help us in our life. due to the mentioned and meanwhile following reasons, I concur with the statement that says it is more important to keep old friends than to make new ones.
First and foremost, making new friends takes a long time. Drilling down to the point, finding someone with proper traits, habits, behavior, and discipline to become friend with, needs a period of time. On the contrary, the old friends are well-known to each other. They know each other’s personality good enough, so they can continue their friendship. For example, it took several years to get accustomed with my friend, Ahmad. At the time, it has been 10 years from our friendship. We know each other as well as to help each other, adequately. As it requires a plenty of time to make a such a new friend, then it is more important for me to keep this friend of mine than to make a new friend.
Secondly, I believe there is more trust between old friends than new ones. In the longtime friendships, trust has taken place between friends. For instance, I confidently trust my old friend and tell him all my secrets. In contrast, I am doubtful whether to say a secret of mine to a new friend or know. This is because the friendship is new, and friends are not familiar with each other.
Additionally, there might be so great memories from the past that values not to forget them. I point out to a memory of mine with my oldest friend. We were at school, ten years ago. I had a bike, riding it to school, then home. One day, we decided to ride the bike in turn. We went out of city on the way coming back to home. Finally, we lost the directions and the way of house. We tried hard and hung a lot till we find it. Right now, when I remember that, I enjoy a lot.
To summarize, I believe making new friends has its own merits, too. But old friendships have valuable plus points which are not forgettable, this is what I think. By and large, due to the mentioned reasons, I think it is more significant to keep old friends than to make new friends.
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.” 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...nds, realistically help us in our life. due to the mentioned and meanwhile followin...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...scipline to become friend with, needs a period of time. On the contrary, the old friends are w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, as well as, by and large, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41355140187 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48919733478 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509345794393 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7641052586 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1379310345 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7586206897 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93103448276 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416343968443 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10515444174 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14967161155 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26539043969 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134539219292 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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