Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally films. Why could this be?
Should government give more financial support to local industries?
there is a little doubt about how useful it is for people to live in house . this matter has been discussed by many and although some say living in apartment gives a lot of benefits to people others, including myself believe that quality of life is better in house.
some people prefer to live in house.They believe that this gives them an opportunity to live life to fully because unlike apartment most house has its own garden or yard and it allows people to plant some flowers or other plants or domesticate some animals in the garden. Another contribution to this trend is that people wo live in house do not encounter some problems which take places in apartment.For example,in some cases there are some problems in water or gas supply in apartment..Therefore, people who live in house can do some physical works or live without facing problems such as water or gas supply thats why their lifestyle is very healthy.
On the other hand apartment is more comfortable than house . some claim that apartment has a lot of advantages which allow people to live safely and comfortably.For instance, most apartments have their own alarm system ,or lift which is very helpful for people.As a consequence, people can leave their apartment safely or can take advantage of apartment’s other privileges.
When,all is said and done, personally,l believe that living in house gives a lot of benefits to people and if people prefer to live in house , they will lead a happy life.
Hasa.
- The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. 11
- Every person should stay at school until the age of eighteen. Do you agree or disagree? 11
- there was a civil rights movement in your city. the state government blocked mobile internet connectivity to curb the rumor spreading. you felt that this move was unreasonable lodge a complaint to chief minister for same. in your letterintroduce yoirselfd 67
- Some psychologists say that doing absolutely nothing for a period of time each day is the key to decreasing stress in everyday life. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 16
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87351778656 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82939532503 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529644268775 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.647038584 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.142857143 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1428571429 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104292036127 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653084181296 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264074948249 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760876166502 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183395488379 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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