All cars that burn fossil fuel s should be banned and electric cars should replace them?
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,Many parents are concerned about their children’s future life.it is commonly believed that parents can teach their children better than other people such as teachers.l am in favour of the idea that parents can teach many things to their children properly.
The first reason why l agree with this statement is that parents can explain anything easily to their children .What l mean by this is that parents can understand their children better than any other person
and they know the easiest way to explain something.it has also been confirmed that children better understand their parents.l strongly believe that children learn a lot from their parents.
Another reason why l agree with this statement is that most parents spend their time with children. it is well known that they see children’s mistakes and help childen to correct their mistakes.As a result of this, children can realize their lapse and they try to do something that is advised by their parents.
On the other hand it should also be accepted that some parents have a daily work that’s why they unable to spend much time with their children.ln fact,this type of parents because of their work can not learn a lot to their children.However,some parents despite their work ,try to spend time with their children.
ln conclusion, because of explaining something easily to their children and spending much time with children, l am convince that parents are efficacious teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18487394958 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82332932464 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1043945102 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.666666667 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.02355867143 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160826996207 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0138275007266 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0140681096355 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150893277059 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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