Dear Ms Sheela
I hope that you are doing well. It has been a long time since we met. I remember it was at your daughter Ms. Rose's wedding we last met. I was wondering if you could write me a reference letter.
As you know, I took up Economic in Kings College post completing high school. I am glad to inform you that I have graduated with distinction in the subject. Now, I am planning to pursue an academic career in university teaching students and doing research. I never expected that I will be given such an opportunity at the very beginning of my career. Moreover, the fact is this job is more crucial to me, as I really find myself unfit for taking up other occupations.
As part of enrollment as a professor, I am also supposed to submit a letter of reference from one of my tutor. I would be grateful if you could give me a reference letter stating my academic achievements at school. Perhaps, you could also mention about my teaching skills, such as the way I helped other pupils in understanding some concepts during my school days if teachers are not present.
Thanks a lot in advance.
Yours Sincerely,
Akilan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms Sheela I hope that you are doing well. It has b...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u could write me a reference letter. As you know, I took up Economic in Kings...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54854368932 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69532906261 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0805029943 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9285714286 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209544212235 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649482226936 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571712148627 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956914764686 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628739900787 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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