Dear James, Tom, George
I hope you guys are doing great. I really, really had a great time with guys on Toronto this summer holidays and you people have given me great memories that I can cherish for my lifetime.
I received the envelope yesterday having a letter and photographs yesterday that you guys had sent me. I was delighted to see those photographs, as all of them were well captured the fun moments we had. I am thankful to you for sharing me these pictures and also there no words to express my gratitude to you guys for having me over there and planing things.
I am terribly sorry for writing to you sooner, as you might remember me saying about my final year exams that I would have to attend once return to India. Hence, I started preparing at a full stretch for it once I arrived here, as I had only a month to exams. Now I am done with it and hoping for better results.
Why don't you guys plan a trip to India in the next month, as since all my exams are over I am quite free these days and I also hope that you folks will also be done with your exams by end of this month. I will plan for all the neccessary arrangements for your stay here and I already have a detailed tour plan including visiting Taj Mahal, Ladhak and other exciting places.
I hope to receive a positive reply soon, from you all.
With love
Akil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that I can cherish for my lifetime. I received the envelope yesterday having ...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hs yesterday that you guys had sent me. I was delighted to see those photographs,...
^
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e well captured the fun moments we had. I am thankful to you for sharing me these...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng me over there and planing things. I am terribly sorry for writing to you so...
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Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t and hoping for better results. Why dont you guys plan a trip to India in the ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27237354086 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22338729739 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0733727757 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342258553452 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122429020564 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058611731765 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156763626949 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812926400122 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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