There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
• Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
• Say what happened the last times you complained
• Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir,
I would like to bring to your notice a problem that I am facing in the changing room in your New Alipore sport center.
Your sport center is the finest center in my locality. However, the air conditioning duct of the changing room is not working. As you know, scuba diving custumes are very difficult to wear and it takes long time to give trial in the changing room. Moreover, faulty duct makes the condition more unpleasent.
Last time, I had the same problem and bought my scuba diving custume without trial. As a result, I had to visit your shop again for replacement as it did not fit me when I tried in my house. I have raised the same issue to your store manager on the same day.
I observed this time that ON-OFF button of the A/C duct in not working. It is quite easy to rectify to rectify but your staff members are not taking things seriously. My request you to make quick action on my concern so that loyal customer, like me, can be made delighted.
Looking froward to seeing a positive response. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours faithfully
Bibhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to rectify'.
Suggestion: to rectify
...C duct in not working. It is quite easy to rectify to rectify but your staff members are not taking t...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nks in anticipation. Yours faithfully Bibhu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55102040816 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39226418831 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.091784822 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7142857143 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216459334936 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631998604191 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601347227281 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110291172127 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828673667713 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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