today more people are travelling than ever before. why is this the case? what are the benefits of travelling for traveller ?
In this state-of-the-art technological world travelling is flourishing exponentially. In bygone days , it was very costly to commute to alien countries , whilst now due to breakthrough of aviation industry commuting becomes evident to all. This essay discusses both the arguments of proposed thoughts.
first and foremost travelling becomes essential due to globalization and industrialization. moreover , masses travel for various reasons like for work , education , pilgrimage and medical treatment for instance Hindu devotees in India travel to a holy place of Amarnath as a pilgrim once in a year . Furthermore , nowadays most of people have their own personal vehicle which proliferate the ratio of travelling.
Irrefutably , exodus of travellers from one place to another place brings enormous benefits to traveller. Firstly travelling enhances one's awareness to life and make people unbiased . Secondly , travelling can be the best way to lessen the stress from one's monotonous life . Thirdly , travelling leads to exchange of culture and tradition with enhancement of travellers horizon. Last but not least , it expands the acquaintances of traveller to all around the globe.
To conclude , travelling is essential in everyone's life as it has myriads of advantages to traveller . All in all , " Travel makes one modest ".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69849246231 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32063707911 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673366834171 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6519900052 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2307692308 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376660259287 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138241022245 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771373592458 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22043743538 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688062674112 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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