Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please, discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Robots, which are developed technology, are going to alter human position. In regard to the statement, this essay will explain about benefits and drawbacks of the issue in the following paragraphs.
The enhancement of the developed technology, including the development of robots, will render numerous upsides and downsides to human life. In accordance with the argument, there are two strengths because of the existence of robots. It, first and foremost, is able to assist people to do their various activities either in work life or daily life. Second but not less crucial, this modern technology, moreover, will make individuals having more motivation to be more creative to create the newest and the advance innovation in technology.
Besides advantages, there are also multifarious weaknesses of this progression. This temporary machine, firstly, will bestow an enormous impact to decrease the amount of man worker in some work places because they are going to replace the position of human work. Secondly, if we are too dependent to this technology we will face a new tribulation which is to make us being more lazy to do something. Lastly, this endeavour is going to render more benefits to prosperous individuals and less feedbacks to economically deprived people.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the existence of robots is going to provide us more positive advancement, nevertheless, as I already wrote above, it gives us more negative impacts instead of good influence, in particular, to a number of workers that will be replaced by robots. Thus, in order to create less influence and make people are capable of competing with robots, we have to rise the ability of individuals in several work fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun feedbacks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... benefits to prosperous individuals and less feedbacks to economically deprived peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, in particular, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92421278435 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0168625406 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0352209907575 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0139311723743 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210906279093 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0240124086012 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00696404906593 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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