Nowadays, education is essential in everyone's life to lead a better future and to meet currents society needs. Certain people state that university should give a equal opportunity to male as well as females in each subject they choose, while other disagrees with the statement.
Many schemes were introduced by the government, to educate a girl child because some families in rural villages think that incurring a lot of amount on women education is waste of money. As the years passed, the negativity is obsolete. These days, many people are educated to fight for their needs one among them is gender equality in education system. Last year survey on education rate, perplexed everyone that female shown higher rate of career growth compared to men. certain demographics states that women's are quite intelligent than that of opposite gender. This is because females has the tendency to manage their skills both at the office as well as at the home. Because of the encouragement they get in they are even moving their heads towards airways, navy and many more., this has happened only giving equal number in universities.
On the other hand, some people claim that giving equal number in the educational institutions is waste of time and money because they are fragile and not hardworking mentalities. Furthermore, they even quoted that most of the constructions was done by the males, this is because females cannot with stand with adverse climatic changes. Some says that males are stronger and broadminded compare with the females.
According to me, education is for all, why do women's have an exemption for this? So, the government should de-root all the negative thoughts among us by providing awareness.It should also pass some laws to provide equal number of seats in every educational institutions.
- Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another? 56
- Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples. 56
- Recycling our waste is a big issue today. A lot of people feel that others are not recycling enough and that the government should make it a legal requirement. In your opinion, should laws be needed to ensure that people recycle their waste? 56
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 78
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s live. Others, think that adults life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'currents'' or 'current's'?
Suggestion: currents'; current's
...ife to lead a better future and to meet currents society needs. Certain people state tha...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eople state that university should give a equal opportunity to male as well as fe...
^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of amounts'.
Suggestion: a lot of amounts
... in rural villages think that incurring a lot of amount on women education is waste of money. A...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... As the years passed, the negativity is obsolete. These days, many people are ed...
^^
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certain
... rate of career growth compared to men. certain demographics states that womens are qui...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... manage their skills both at the office as well as at the home. Because of the encourageme...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...roadminded compare with the females. According to me, education is for all, why do womens ha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this? So, the government should de-root all the negative thoughts among us by pr...
^^
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...houghts among us by providing awareness.It should also pass some laws to provide e...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67328585604 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3685860556 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148262581119 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472699815701 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055088185151 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101889765148 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405222343267 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.