In these days, the shooting scale count is rapidly increasing as many people holding their guns. some people opine that having guns for their safety purpose, other for the social persona that they would like to portray it, to the society.
Recently, a black shoot at white person after investigation by cops got to know it is because of rationality and color discrimination. some use the weapons to win the arguments, and some people loot money and goods from unknowns, the list never ends because crime rate is increasing in number.
whatever might be the reason according to me shooting is an offense until and unless you carry a valid reason. Now a days, the government rules and regulations were better streamlined even then we hear incidents taking place here or there. So its our responsibility to report the incident as soon as you can trace any violence happening near to you.
If we keep on tracking and reporting the incidents in timely manner each place and every country could become better and violence free nation.
educating individuals at schools and free campaigns can lead to good results.
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- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s live. Others, think that adults life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. 67
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 78
- University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion: Some
...f rationality and color discrimination. some use the weapons to win the arguments, a...
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Suggestion: Whatever
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Suggestion: Nowadays
...il and unless you carry a valid reason. Now a days, the government rules and regulations w...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Suggestion:
...ere better streamlined even then we hear incidents taking place here or there. So...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61637251948 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718085106383 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1834552158 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210682809026 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07368985247 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521741119419 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895471079606 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665716097063 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.