Dear Mr. Rudyard,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the music course that you are offering in your club. I am particularly interested in learning how to play the violin. I was always interested in mastering this instrument starting from my childhood. In my adolescence, I attended one orchestra where the violin was the main piece in the whole time, and I loved that tune very much. Then I asked my father to buy me a violin but, that time no one was around to teach me how to play it. I tried to self-educate myself and somewhat succeeded in learning some tune.
Starting from then, I am always searching for an expert teacher. Now, as your club is offering courses to learn this instrument, I am very much interested. That is why I require some information regarding the course. The advertising does not specify the time, location of the course, and the number of students who will be able to join in a single class. Also, I need information on whether I can be a part of the orchestra which is owned by your club.
I played for one amateur orchestra a year ago. The experience in that orchestra was astounding. I always dreamt of playing in a band from then.
I will be waiting for the answers to my query regarding the violin course.
Yours sincerely,
Manirul Islam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ted in learning how to play the violin. I was always interested in mastering this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58547008547 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69886936119 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559829059829 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7184161986 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0625 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133773723913 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448102096344 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779940587308 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566030737811 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567797985187 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.